This holds true no matter the ‘level’ of the struggle. It
doesn’t have to be a fight to the death. It doesn’t have to be a “save humanity
or it goes extinct” kind of conflict. A child struggling against prejudice, a
woman struggling to escape an abusive relationship, a man striving to find
meaning in a world where he feels like a spent coin are all examples of the
kinds of struggles that could, and have, become engaging fiction.
I’m reading a book now where the writer didn’t know this
simple fact, or at least hasn’t illustrated his knowledge of it so far. The
book is Zanthar of the Many Worlds by
Robert Moore Williams. A man is transported to another planet. Within a few
moments he acquires some allies who decide he’s a god, and he defeats a horde of
attackers. He kills something referred to as a “miniature dinosaur” with one
blow from a “copper hammer” he’d been
carrying in his lab when the transportation occurred. He has no problem communicating
with his new friends, one of whom proves capable of healing any wound merely by
laying hands on it and concentrating.
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20 comments:
I'm always amazed by how easily writers forget things they know. I'm thinking I'll print this out and stick it up near my computer! Well said.
Funny, it's usually the first thing I think of if I get an idea for a story!
I was mildly interested for a minute by the cover. But I'd likely be as bored as yiu seem, it's all so easy.
Charles, nice post. I think you mean a "direct relationship" rather than an "inverse relationship" between struggle & reward.
Candy, thanks. Yes, it seems pretty easy to fall into bad habits.
Heather, I think the author was probably hired to quickly churn out some titles and just took the easy route.
Randy, yeah, the cover and the idea that it was sword and planet had me interested but...meh.
Seth, you are correct. Thanks.
Another important writing lesson, Charles!
Thanks. Aloha
Oh, thank goodness. I thought you were going to talk about one of my books. :-)
Makes you realize how boring a perfect day can really be.
Cloudia, thankee.
Ty, dude, Of course not.
Alex, indeed.
Charles, I'd have picked up this book and read it solely on the Conan-like cover, but then covers can be deceptive.
I've run into writers who loved their protag so much, they didn't want to do anything mean to him/her. :/ Also writers who wrote out wish-fulfilment fantasies where their avatar-protag had everything go right for him or her, and they became rich and powerful and adored, and the bad guys were all stupid and cardboard-evil and easily defeated. I suspect this guy is one or the other of these types. And I agree, their work is generally pretty boring to read.
Angie
writing I think is about having a voice
Charles,
Thanks for sharing your thoughts on that novel. Never heard of it before. More importantly, thanks for the writing advice. ;)
Okay, so now I don't feel bad about being so mean to my characters. Lol.
Prashant, I got it because I heard it was sword and planet and I'm a big fan of the genre. This is not a good example, though
Angie, I also wonder if the writer thought he was writing just for 12 year old boys who might enjoy such wish fulfillment stuff. Although I'm probably doing 12 year old boys a disservice.
Lisa, a hugely important element, and not much of a voice in this tale.
Tyhitia, yeah, be mean as can be too them. It's our job! :)
It took me five complete edits of my ms. to figure out the exact nature of the struggle. It turned out to be very different from what I thought.
Boring is the read when the author transfers their own personal hatred of conflict onto the page of fiction. dull dull dull.
so true...it does make for a pretty good yawn when everything comes so easy for the hero in the story...and it def does not relate to real life...got my 28 page paper done...so i think i should go slay a dino pretty easy....
Patti, the overall struggle for sure. But smaller individual struggles have to happen all along the way and this one doesn't give us much of that.
Mark, yes indeed. Or even the arising of conflict that is so easily dispatched you hardly knew it was there.
Brian, my students were in agony over having to do a 10 page paper, with 8 pages of text. You'd thought I would have assigned them to rewrite War and Peace.
Charles -- LOL! When I was doing lower division, the teacher would assign an essay, say 800-1000 words. All the other kids would be moaning and griping, "How can I write 800 words on this?!" and I'd be moaning and griping, "What the heck can you say in 1000 words?!" :D I guess you can tell who's destined to be a writer.
Angie
Angie, absolutely. :)
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