It's probably part of my OCD
characteristics that I tend to keep fairly detailed notes about every story I
write. When was it written? Where did the idea come from? Did it undergo major
changes from the draft form or not? Where was it published?
I usually include this information in books I publish through Razored Zen
Press. However, the answers to my standard questions are a little different
than normal for the story Mage, Maze, Demon, which was recently published by Beat to a Pulp. I thought I might
share them here.
First, the
catalyst for writing Mage, Maze, Demon did not come from within but from
without. A couple of years back, I got an intriguing email from David
Cranmer, the editor at Beat to a Pulp. He was thinking about publishing some
stories in honor of Kyle Knapp, his nephew who had died, and was looking for
writers who might develop tales based on prompts from Kyle’s dream journal. The
prompt he was considering me for was: “I was a barbarian warrior trying to
escape a maze.” I liked the idea of developing such a piece and decided to give
it a go.
David said there
was no particular deadline so I worked on the story off and on during the fall
of 2013 and showed it to my writing group in December. I put the finishing
touches on it in early January of 2014. Often, stories spring into my head with
many of the details already laid out, but that wasn’t the case with Mage, Maze,
Demon. The plot underwent several alterations and title changes before I
settled on the final version. The name of character also underwent some
changes. Since the root of the story came from Kyle Knapp’s journal, I wanted a
character name to evoke that, and finally settled on Bryle.
In early 2016,
Mage, Maze, Demon was released as an ebook by Beat to a Pulp, and this was
followed in April 2016 by a paperback release (Out Now). The print version has two
excellent bonus stories included, “The Lizard’s Ardent Uniform” by Chris F.
Holm, and “Babylon Heist” by Garnett Elliott.
I was very
pleased to take part in this project and am happy with how the story turned
out. Bryle became a character that I liked very much, and I wouldn’t be
surprised if his adventures don’t continue somewhere down the line.
That's good, Charles, developing the story from just a one sentence prompt, and it looks like you got 'er done in a fairly short time.
ReplyDeleteOne sentence to published story. Amazing how that happens, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteThank you Charles
ReplyDeleteWhat amazes me Charles is how completely different our minds work when it comes to sorting words and placing them on the page. You are prompted by comments, dreams, internalization of outside events. If I ever lose my lone good eye, I do believe I will have lost every prompt ever to motivate a words to rise and from that word a poem.
ReplyDeleteOscar, it worked out for me time wise since I had some time off around that point to work on it.
ReplyDeleteAlex, it was a fun challenge.
Cloudia, thumbs up!
Mark, I do spend a lot of time living inside my head.
A short story out of a single line — sounds like flash fiction but I know it isn't. This takes some thinking.
ReplyDeleteAn interesting homage to the deceased and I'm glad you used the prompt so well, to your and to the publisher's delight/satisfaction. Congrats.
ReplyDeletePrashant, it did take a while to build it
ReplyDeleteSzelsofa, thanks. Appreciate it.
It is interesting to read how people are inspired to write and where their ideas come from. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteSage, I always love to hear this kind of info from writers
ReplyDeleteI love details and I love words, I Mage define and it was so interesting
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy finding out the inspiration for a storyline.
ReplyDeleteLisa, thank you
ReplyDeleteBernard, me too
Charles-I think I totally lack the imagination to ever write like you. Non-fiction is all I got!!
ReplyDeleteJodi, I doubt that. You just have to cut it loose. :)
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