Sunday, November 22, 2015

In Their Glory

Fiddling around with a poem today. Not quite sure where it might be going. Here's what I've got so far.

I see the wolves of winter
in their glory,
wearing coats of blood.
As black eyes flame to blue,
they bare the teeth that
bring justice to the night.


I see the feral horses of hell.
I hear the saber rattle
of iron hooves on stone.
Their eyes roil with desire
to sow their foes destruction
and reap them of life.


19 comments:

  1. Power filled images! Press on! Readers await.

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  2. That is very much as i imagine your inner world, Charles






    Warm ALOHA,
    ComfortSpiral

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  3. R. T., thanks, man

    Cloudia, pretty much!

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  4. Charles, I get a clear mental imagery from your "fantasy" poem.

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  5. What Cloudia said. Exactly.

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  6. Prashant, excellent!

    Patti, it is a wild and crazy place.

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  7. Descriptive and with good imagery.

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  8. For some reason, I can't think of anything else but my own aging when reading this.

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  9. Interesting images of destruction on the horizon, or do the wolves and horses fight it out?

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  10. X. Dell, that's rather sad, my friend.

    Sage, I think that is exactly where it is headed

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  11. I just LOVE this, Charles! Very good! This is... you. Write on, very good indeed.

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  12. Vesper, thanks. Glad you enjoyed

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  13. Wow, that's impressive.

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  14. Pretty grim, Charles, considering it's Thanksgiving, but a very happy Thanksgiving to you.

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  15. Riot Kitty, thankee!

    Richard R. lol. True. Guess I'm always that way

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  16. Stark imagery. That's good fooling around.

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  17. Charles-I love wolves! Happy Thanksgiving to you and Lana!

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