Almost everything is done on the anthology except a final read through. I'm calling it Bitter Steel.
I did a preface that is 700 words, although I’m gonna try to shave that down a bit. The preface focuses primarily on Robert E. Howard as the man who created the Sword & Sorcery genre. It doesn’t say too much about the stories in the collection, because I want them to stand on their own. I did mention that some of the stories have alternate endings to those that appeared in the original publications.
I set the Thal Kyrin stories up first in the collection, after an opening poem, and I put them into chronological order. That meant doing some revisions on a few of them, and I also used very short “end notes” behind a few stories to explain where gaps still exist. I made judicious use of “Author Notes” at the beginning of a couple of stories, primarily to let people know when they were going to get a humorous story as opposed to the more serious stuff that makes up the bulk of the collection. I also did a fair amount of tightening on the pieces throughout.
I’ve always kept a file labeled Story Notes, where I put information about when I wrote the stories and about any influences or other items that seem important to me. And I edited these notes heavily and included them at the end of the entire collection. I figure most readers will probably skip ‘em, but the writers might find those bits interesting.
Tomorrow I’m taking off because my son and his girlfriend are coming up for Christmas. I’m looking forward to seeing him. I’ve got the meal planned. Steak, corn on the cob, garlic bread with cheese, and ice cream for dessert.
Merry Christmas to everyone. I’ll be checking blogs again on Wednesday and then may take off for Christmas eve and Christmas.
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Your planned meal is JUST THE BESTEST I might invite meself to dinner lol
ReplyDeleteHave the most wonderful of christmas's despite all the family problems....... life aye, its what we sign up for..
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Ice cream . . . more into hot mulled wine and hot mince pies here! It's snowing . . .
ReplyDeleteHave a wonderful Christmas, Charles.
By the way, I love the title Bitter Steel - (as the creator of Geraldine Steel, how can I not?)
Came together pretty quickly it seems then Charles...not the writing but the organizing, congratulations for the brisk pace and hope you enjoy the kids. Best to Lana in her recovering from the old slice and dice.
ReplyDeleteA summer meal! Isn't it funny how we share this. Here the crockpots are out and steaming away. Have the loveliest of Christmases.
ReplyDeleteMarmite Toasty, yeah, anyone can make Turkey for Christmas. lol. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteLeigh Russell, well it'll probably be close to 70 here today so Ice cream is no burden. But made I'll do Ice cream floats.
Mark, thankee. Yeah, it's amazing how much I can get accomplished when I have a few days off from "work."
Pattinase, they've been to two other Christmas family festivals and are probably sick of turkey.
So much thought and planning! I'll never look at a collection of short stories quite the same again.
ReplyDeleteEnjoy Christmas, Charles!
I would like to sit in your class one of these days!
ReplyDeleteHappy time with family and enjoy the break.
I like that title and look forward to being able to get my hands on the colection.
ReplyDeleteMerry Christmas to all as well.
How long did it take you to compile this anthology?
ReplyDeleteI definitely like the title. Your juxtaposition seems right. Does the poem you're starting out with have an edge to it? With a title like 'Bitter Steel' an introductory poem would need some bite.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely holiday with your family!
ReplyDeleteI must have missed the mention, but how are you going to be producing this book? Or are you shopping it out to someone?
My kind of meal. Enjoy the visit with your son.
ReplyDeleteNo shrimp and creole cooking? Have fun with your son and his girl friend. Let us know when your anthology is published.
ReplyDeleteI don't know how you can be so honest about the writing process.
ReplyDeleteI just down a half-quart of whiskey at night, Get up in the morning to see if my cigarette is drawing properly, brew up a caraffe of coffee and let fly.
Lately, I have eased off because my computer broke down before I did.
... wrong and unhealthy, of course, but how come I'm older than just about anybody?...but then the writin' ain't all that good. :)
Sounds good, Charles - both the anthology and the meal. Have fun.
ReplyDeletegrats on the progress, charles!
ReplyDeletemerry christmas to you, lana, and the rest of your kin :)
Congrats, man! Excellent, and perfect timing for the holidays' start. Three cheers' (the ordering of the collection sounds right on, and the title is a sharp one ;)
ReplyDeleteCharles, it must be a relief to not only have decided on the order, but to have DONE it. I'm sure you made the decision that is right. You dinner sounds yummy. Merry Christmas to You and Lana..
ReplyDeleteEnjoy that meal!
ReplyDeleteAloha, Charles & Lana
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Bitter Steel? What a highly cool title, Charles. I'm anticipating some highly exciting swordplay...
ReplyDeleteBitter Steel? What a highly cool title, Charles. I'm anticipating some highly exciting swordplay...
ReplyDeleteLove that title. Have a great holiday.
ReplyDeleteOh, NICE title! I like your format.Always appreciate author's notes in a collection like this.
ReplyDeleteCandy, Mayhaps I planned too much, but it seemed reasonable at the time.
ReplyDeleteOcean Girl, thankee. And you too.
David J. West, thanks, much appreciated.
Voidwalker, the stories were written over a decade at least. It took a day to write and revise the preface and the author notes. Took about a week of reading through and revising the stories themselves. There was quite a lot of thinking during that time.
BernardL, the intro poem is a piece written on the same rhyme scheme and rhythm as Robert E. Howard’s “Recompense,” which is a great poem. I mentioned Howard quite a bit in the preface so it seems to fit.
writtenwyrdd, I’ve got a publisher in mind for it. You have a great holiday as well.
Travis Erwin, he ate every bite of his steak and lots of corn, garlic toast, and cucumbers. I was glad to see him have such an appetite. My best compliment.
sage, well I’m only a transplanted Louisianian so I haven’t mastered all those cooking intricacies yet. And mission accomplished on the have fun part.
ivan, maybe it’s the difference in what we right. In one strange way, your stuff seems more internal than mine. I pluck mine out of the air. I couldn’t handle either the whiskey or the coffee. Or the cigarette actually.
Don, thankee. And we did have some fun.
laughingwolf, thanks, and to you and yours as well. And the pup!
Erik Donald France, lol. Sharp one indeed! Thanks.
jodi, thanks Jodi. Looking forward to a bit of rest these next few days.
Cloudia, it turned out very good if I do say so myself.
Rick, I’m glad you like the title. I’ve had that in mind for a collection for a very very long time.
James Reasoner, and happy holidays to you and Livia and the kids! I came up with that title for a potential collection back when I was in grad school and didn’t even have any stories written. Talk about hubris eh?
Bernita, thanks. There are other ways I could format it but this seems to work. I hope I can keep from second guessing myself.
I love the title, Charles! And I'm glad Lana is doing better.
ReplyDeleteI hope you and yours enjoy a Merry Christmas.
Hey Charles,
ReplyDeleteOkay, I'm officially jealous of your Christmas meal! You guys are going to have so much fun -- have a great holiday and much love to Lana -- hope she's feeling much better!
Merry Christmas!!
ReplyDeleteTerrie
If I don't see you before then, Merry Christmas!
ReplyDeleteSarah Hina, I'm glad you like it. Yes, she's feeling better, although she seems to have hit a plateau today. Merry Christmas to you and yours as well.
ReplyDeleteMichelle, My son ate like there'd be no food the next day. I was pleased!
Terrie Farley Moran, same to you!
Steve Malley, and to you and the Tiny Dynamo!
Merry Christmas, Charles. Wishing you and Lana all the best in 2010.
ReplyDeleteIt seems like it would be almost easier to do a straight novel, than compilation, but hey, nice job! :)
ReplyDeleteWishing you a very very Merry Christmas. (I didn't realize you had a kindle. Somehow I feel I should've known that. ;) )
ReplyDeleteRichard, thanks, and to you too.
ReplyDeleteVoidwalker, well not as much time as writing a novel, though writing all those stories separately probably took more time.
Barrie, I haven't used my Kindle in a while but I have a bunch of books on it.
Good Yule Season!
ReplyDeleteTo You and Lana!
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Charles,
ReplyDeleteCan't wait to read the anthology.
You and Lana have a great holiday!
Anna-lys, thanks! You too!
ReplyDeleteScott, gonna be Howardian. I hope at least.
A Merry Ho-Ho to you guys!
ReplyDeleteI love the title Charles and your meal sounds absolutely delicious.
ReplyDeleteI wish you and yours a most wonderful Christmas.
Oh, PS! Christmas episode is posted.
ReplyDeleteMerry Christmas, Charles! I hope you're enjoying that dinner! Much love to you and yours.
ReplyDeleteivan, same to you, my friend.
ReplyDeleteMiddle Ditch, I'm glad my son really enjoyed it. I'll check out the episode.
Michelle, and thank you for the card. We both got a kick out of that.
Merry Christmas Charles. I wish you and your family sweet happiness.
ReplyDeleteSoft love,
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That meal sounds wonderful! I hope that you had a great visit.
ReplyDeleteMerry Christmas Charles.
Merry Christmas Charles :)
ReplyDeleteI know I am getting in on the tail end of your latest writing accomplishment, but it sounds interesting. "Bitter Steel" is an intriguing title. Hope your Christmas was everything you wanted it to be.
ReplyDeletehope you had a good holiday. the anthology sounds like it's really coming along. i like that title.
ReplyDeleteTara, thank you.
ReplyDeletejennifer, Josh ate more than I've seen him eat in a long time. It was quite gratifying!
Miladysa, and to you!
TechnoBabe, thanks, and thanks for visiting!
Greg Schwartz, so far, so good, my friend.