tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post4505880498050808887..comments2024-02-12T17:59:33.534-06:00Comments on RAZORED ZEN: Do You, DarknessCharles Gramlichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comBlogger39125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-33529740403278465682009-05-28T11:41:11.745-05:002009-05-28T11:41:11.745-05:00Alex, yeah, there must be a story behind the story...Alex, yeah, there must be a story behind the story there. I haven't imagined it yet, though.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-74193537650947018512009-05-28T08:22:30.146-05:002009-05-28T08:22:30.146-05:00enticing. the wording is both fun (I love twinkles...enticing. the wording is both fun (I love twinkles, crescent, swept, radiant, presided) and descriptive, but best of all are all the questions left over at the end. a mere man? Darkness is marrying a mortal?Alex Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08019131858093764715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-26710860979993845232009-05-26T11:43:00.371-05:002009-05-26T11:43:00.371-05:00jennifer, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Mimi L...jennifer, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.<br /><br />Mimi Lenox, *preens*. I kind liked that myself.<br /><br />Vesper, thank you. I appreciate that.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-91977079126721839442009-05-26T06:16:08.233-05:002009-05-26T06:16:08.233-05:00Beautiful, scary stuff... I love it!Beautiful, scary stuff... I love it!Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-27295417886081270902009-05-25T14:38:33.285-05:002009-05-25T14:38:33.285-05:00"twinkles of stars sewn into its folds"....lovely...."twinkles of stars sewn into its folds"....lovely.Mimi Lenoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01616635898420835541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-15027551267358753692009-05-25T14:25:13.487-05:002009-05-25T14:25:13.487-05:00Love how you used wedding vows and the idea of a r...Love how you used wedding vows and the idea of a reluctant groom. This was <I>really</I> good.jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08547226679311827501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-32455530550294250092009-05-24T19:23:17.924-05:002009-05-24T19:23:17.924-05:00spyscribbler, wow, I'm not sure I've ever been rea...spyscribbler, wow, I'm not sure I've ever been read on a palm pilot before. I must be moving into the 20th century. Still awhile to go to reach the 21st. Thanks for the kind words.<br /><br />ARCHAVIST, thanks, I appreciate that.<br /><br />MarmiteToasty, glad you liked.<br /><br />Lana, I loved that pork chop flash you made for dinner, sweetums. There lies a true talent.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-14791928971734285392009-05-24T15:32:47.608-05:002009-05-24T15:32:47.608-05:00Lemme guess...there wasn't a dry eye because every...Lemme guess...there wasn't a dry eye because everyone was dead? J/K<br />Another lovely little flash, baby. You're so talented.Lana Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06975996208260144558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-12602964651311479502009-05-24T15:27:48.036-05:002009-05-24T15:27:48.036-05:00Brill..
xBrill..<br /><br />xMarmiteToastyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02536695634856882487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-89122470637076412352009-05-24T13:24:00.001-05:002009-05-24T13:24:00.001-05:00Poetic to say the leastPoetic to say the leastGary Dobbs/Jack Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10935686140719743351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-33876281921700329882009-05-24T11:12:41.496-05:002009-05-24T11:12:41.496-05:00I love how evocative both of these are. (I'm inclu...I love how evocative both of these are. (I'm including the last one only because I read it on my palm pilot and couldn't comment.)<br /><br />This one totally made me shudder.Spy Scribblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14299551957327543491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-86763773669702214322009-05-24T10:41:13.723-05:002009-05-24T10:41:13.723-05:00Erik, yes, living it in my imagination is enough.
...Erik, yes, living it in my imagination is enough.<br /><br />Middle Ditch, it can be cruel.<br /><br />Merisi,I didn't think about it at the time but it does have a kind of operatic feel to it.<br /><br />Randy Johnson, thanks. I've been writing steadily on a book the past week or so so maybe I've forced my creaky jointed mind into some movement.<br /><br />benjibopper, thanks for the kind words!Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-71945846327898798072009-05-24T08:57:54.166-05:002009-05-24T08:57:54.166-05:00dark like the title, touched by beauty.dark like the title, touched by beauty.Chris Benjaminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00402945887045545024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-42285670922857221902009-05-24T07:18:46.529-05:002009-05-24T07:18:46.529-05:00Like that! Your last couple of posts have been int...Like that! Your last couple of posts have been interesting. It's a nice look into how your mind works. Exactly what a writer needs. A working mind!LOL!Randy Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04738462837640721126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-21052361082609706522009-05-24T03:31:13.211-05:002009-05-24T03:31:13.211-05:00"Oh Isis and Osiris,
guide them as they now make t..."<I>Oh Isis and Osiris,<br />guide them as they now make their dangerous way ... </I>" <br /><br />I imagine a scene <A HREF="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pjiia_LlQmE" REL="nofollow">like this here</A>, followed by <A HREF="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oeP0NOPAIys" REL="nofollow">one like this</A>. The couple desires a little more sense of doom? How about <A HREF="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CDbpyMex1kU" REL="nofollow">this</A>?<br />(These are all scenes from various productions of "The Magic Flute.") <br /><br />Unfortunately I could not find my favorite Flute, the one from the <A HREF="http://www.amazon.com/Mozart-Zauberflote-Gruberova-Salzburger-Festspiele/dp/B0009XSMBW/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=dvd&qid=1243151459&sr=8-1" REL="nofollow">Salzburg Festival 1982</A>,with Edita Gruberova as Queen of the Night and Marti Talvela as Sarastro (what a voice - he sang from high up in the so-called Riding School, carved into rock, and several stories high). I still get goosebumps listening to their voices on CD (I was lucky enough to attend the performance back then - as young as I was, I loved it).Merisihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781937797213521146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-64601854074176028852009-05-24T03:25:08.225-05:002009-05-24T03:25:08.225-05:00Thanks Charles. We definitely should fear beauty m...Thanks Charles. We definitely should fear beauty me thinks.Middle Ditchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16493665280732775898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-54149770541890987332009-05-24T00:44:54.737-05:002009-05-24T00:44:54.737-05:00There's a ceremony I'd rather skip in person. Nice...There's a ceremony I'd rather skip in person. Nicely wrought.Erik Donald Francehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02332500850365598564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-6742814968647206362009-05-23T21:06:06.489-05:002009-05-23T21:06:06.489-05:00Middle Ditch, glad you enjoyed. Excellent episode...Middle Ditch, glad you enjoyed. Excellent episode on Middle Ditch today.<br /><br />jodi, Should beauty fear? Or should we fear beauty?<br /><br />Scarlet, glad you enjoyed. Thanks for stopping by.<br /><br />Steve Malley, ...and then serves you your pet lab in a stew when you get home? yes, I know of whom you speak!Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-61797533653125980522009-05-23T17:45:56.448-05:002009-05-23T17:45:56.448-05:00You forgot to mention the part six months later wh...You forgot to mention the part six months later where she sets fire to your house while you're at work and stabs the mailman with a pair of cuticle scissors...Steve Malleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17561234111786788616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-28543574924190892272009-05-23T13:51:44.151-05:002009-05-23T13:51:44.151-05:00Que bien. Thanks for the introduction to darkness...Que bien. Thanks for the introduction to darkness.Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17560614073319109150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-6130745311868427492009-05-23T13:21:13.801-05:002009-05-23T13:21:13.801-05:00Charles, she is beautiful and dark as the night an...Charles, she is beautiful and dark as the night and he has every reason to be scared!jodihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01798858210138821711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-8133668532026574712009-05-23T13:21:09.421-05:002009-05-23T13:21:09.421-05:00Charles, she is beautiful and dark as the night an...Charles, she is beautiful and dark as the night and he has every reason to be scared!jodihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01798858210138821711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-35999874410158554302009-05-23T13:19:10.011-05:002009-05-23T13:19:10.011-05:00Okay ..... I stopped grinning. Cool Charles. I jus...Okay ..... I stopped grinning. Cool Charles. I just love the style of writing. Very poetic.Middle Ditchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16493665280732775898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-78305470110584065972009-05-23T12:46:52.602-05:002009-05-23T12:46:52.602-05:00G, I interpreted your meaning, dude.G, I interpreted your meaning, dude.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-27823262667802947842009-05-23T12:38:06.324-05:002009-05-23T12:38:06.324-05:00Charles, I just reread your post (I have simply go...Charles, I just reread your post (I have simply got to learn not to read things within the first fifteen minutes of waking up) and what I should of said was, "I can't wait to hear what the <B>grooms</B>vows are."G. B. Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09783331838434598963noreply@blogger.com