tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post307701599510893105..comments2024-02-12T17:59:33.534-06:00Comments on RAZORED ZEN: Poetry and JackCharles Gramlichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-83344418934726045102013-06-11T20:32:30.630-05:002013-06-11T20:32:30.630-05:00Something about spirits lubing the spirit. Even O...Something about spirits lubing the spirit. Even Ovid took note that water drinkers just don't have it when it comes to poetry.eric1313https://www.blogger.com/profile/13807078704660045859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-53297500524576717412013-06-04T13:30:57.404-05:002013-06-04T13:30:57.404-05:00Laughingwolf, thankee for the link.
anonymous-9, ...Laughingwolf, thankee for the link.<br /><br />anonymous-9, that would be extremely cool.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-33701342296283254882013-06-03T20:36:20.367-05:002013-06-03T20:36:20.367-05:00I wish there was a way for you to meet the Black L...I wish there was a way for you to meet the Black Label guys and introduce them to your lyrics. It would make a great song.<br />Anonymous-9Anonymous-9https://www.blogger.com/profile/09018422038963109199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-90847234145576736982013-06-02T18:37:46.948-05:002013-06-02T18:37:46.948-05:00pretty much covers it all...
reminds me a bit of:...pretty much covers it all...<br /><br />reminds me a bit of:<br /><br />https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yVw96wzmZC8 <br /><br />laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-23328076346084054102013-06-02T00:44:27.755-05:002013-06-02T00:44:27.755-05:00Patti, thankee. It might make a decent song. Proba...Patti, thankee. It might make a decent song. Probably have to be done by Motorhead! :)<br />Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-759161358069073932013-06-01T08:23:18.916-05:002013-06-01T08:23:18.916-05:00I can imagine those as lyrics to a song as well as...I can imagine those as lyrics to a song as well as a poem. pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-55711168281982850502013-05-31T20:04:37.070-05:002013-05-31T20:04:37.070-05:00Oscar, indeed.
Deka, well, I wrote it while liste...Oscar, indeed.<br /><br />Deka, well, I wrote it while listening to music so maybe that fits.<br /><br />H and H, thanks. I did like that line.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-89764316111583142962013-05-31T19:34:48.445-05:002013-05-31T19:34:48.445-05:00nice one! i particularly like "motor dreams....nice one! i particularly like "motor dreams."Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15344808703550376121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-1933635813202912192013-05-31T16:20:53.879-05:002013-05-31T16:20:53.879-05:00This need a guitar riff asapThis need a guitar riff asapDeka Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08328847551867893941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-49357453866005041322013-05-31T13:26:44.582-05:002013-05-31T13:26:44.582-05:00Very nice, Charles. That Jack brings out the best ...Very nice, Charles. That Jack brings out the best of times and sometimes a terrible hangover.Oscar Casehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10328166606910469945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-26232328255044724832013-05-31T08:46:07.001-05:002013-05-31T08:46:07.001-05:00X Dell, good thing they didn't last long or I ...X Dell, good thing they didn't last long or I would have killed myself.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-62891250532514790502013-05-31T01:35:54.934-05:002013-05-31T01:35:54.934-05:00Yeah, you got Jack. I don't got Jack.
Freewh...Yeah, you got Jack. I don't got Jack.<br /><br />Freewheeling days. <br /><br />Of course, even those of us who never rode would tend to think of our youth that way.X. Dellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17561609651507566271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-28151371351949949732013-05-31T01:35:41.814-05:002013-05-31T01:35:41.814-05:00Yeah, you got Jack. I don't got Jack.
Freewh...Yeah, you got Jack. I don't got Jack.<br /><br />Freewheeling days. <br /><br />Of course, even those of us who never rode would tend to think of our youth that way.X. Dellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17561609651507566271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-41508373214816860602013-05-30T21:04:47.578-05:002013-05-30T21:04:47.578-05:00G.B., cool, man. Glad to be of some help.
Sidney,...G.B., cool, man. Glad to be of some help.<br /><br />Sidney, thanks!Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-91578480017638832262013-05-30T19:09:11.844-05:002013-05-30T19:09:11.844-05:00Cool!Cool!Sidneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16284680909152676159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-87524655217416043012013-05-30T17:02:01.773-05:002013-05-30T17:02:01.773-05:00My friend, when I saw this poem this morning (5/30...My friend, when I saw this poem this morning (5/30) and read the last lines, it inspired me so much that I broke through my block for finding a title for my current novella, which was the last remaining thing to be fixed before I resubmit it.<br /><br />I now have two viable titles to choose from.<br /><br />Thankee.G. B. Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09783331838434598963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-82169789873435123172013-05-30T07:46:40.840-05:002013-05-30T07:46:40.840-05:00Erik, thanks man!
Riot Kitty, glad you enjoyed!
...Erik, thanks man!<br /><br />Riot Kitty, glad you enjoyed!<br /><br />Prashant, I used to do a lot more poetry. I don't write that much these days but I do like the art form quite a lot.<br /><br />Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-40188638514536997492013-05-30T00:59:56.709-05:002013-05-30T00:59:56.709-05:00Good verse, Charles! I think poetry has to come sp...Good verse, Charles! I think poetry has to come spontaneously and I also think you've dabbled in it before.Prashant C. Trikannadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16079354501998741758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-18031259086283160922013-05-29T23:56:14.533-05:002013-05-29T23:56:14.533-05:00That is really quite good!That is really quite good!Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-48335251354398569892013-05-29T16:59:09.438-05:002013-05-29T16:59:09.438-05:00Yeah, man ~! I dig.
"And the whiskey runs
Li...Yeah, man ~! I dig.<br /><br />"And the whiskey runs<br />Like gasoline" -- a wonderful<br />word concoction, indeed. Erik Donald Francehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02332500850365598564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-15069711579692613092013-05-29T14:56:59.744-05:002013-05-29T14:56:59.744-05:00Bernard, I've been shiny side down too many ti...Bernard, I've been shiny side down too many times.<br /><br />Sage, I've had it twice. Not pleasant. Glad it isn't catching.<br /><br />Gina, you wouldn't like it, I am sure. :)<br /><br />Alex, the final truth! :)<br />Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-66094936716590966122013-05-29T13:25:42.529-05:002013-05-29T13:25:42.529-05:00Charles, I really dig the last part!!Charles, I really dig the last part!!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-50643824009634333142013-05-29T12:42:23.005-05:002013-05-29T12:42:23.005-05:00This is an interesting post! I've never had ro...This is an interesting post! I've never had road rash before.<br /><br />www.modernworld4.blogspot.comGina Gaohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09032273127593718883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-1985746297338927732013-05-29T11:00:55.648-05:002013-05-29T11:00:55.648-05:00Jack got my attention, Walking Man's comments ...Jack got my attention, Walking Man's comments got me chuckling... "road rash!"sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-45576043092558888092013-05-29T08:44:42.300-05:002013-05-29T08:44:42.300-05:00Good one! Shiny side up, my friend.Good one! Shiny side up, my friend.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.com