tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post1892720811627639898..comments2024-02-12T17:59:33.534-06:00Comments on RAZORED ZEN: The Rain Plummetted, from Lucas's ChallengeCharles Gramlichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-46461006489579989782007-04-05T08:54:00.000-05:002007-04-05T08:54:00.000-05:00Yes, the 'die scum' stood out a bit!Yes, the 'die scum' stood out a bit!Danny Tagaloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15899578338574197919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-91075069226794462222007-04-05T07:30:00.000-05:002007-04-05T07:30:00.000-05:00ooooooo nooooooo......hectic....but well done...I ...ooooooo nooooooo......hectic....but well done...I was imagining moles, but the end got me a bit off track..I sometimes confuse easily,.....it still was GREAT...:)Drizelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16746480963316566816noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-75401279758899267202007-04-05T06:09:00.000-05:002007-04-05T06:09:00.000-05:00I did so enjoy this and wonder if this shook you l...I did so enjoy this and wonder if this shook you loose a bit. At one time Stu had mentioned that one of the reasons writers use assignments is to shake loose, and then I had noticed on Michelle's blog that you were having what I percieved as some type of blockage.<BR/><BR/>Anyway, I like the way you weave a mysterious tale and especially adore the ending.Susan Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05566328070072489203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-40101416917424234062007-04-04T23:16:00.000-05:002007-04-04T23:16:00.000-05:00That rain just might wash away the foundation to t...That rain just might wash away the foundation to the house.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-54114093781504130222007-04-04T19:37:00.000-05:002007-04-04T19:37:00.000-05:00Excellent, Charles! Intriguing and definitely pull...Excellent, Charles! Intriguing and definitely pulls the reader in. I'd like to see "the rest of the story."Sphinx Inkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429797402360703839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-45405601414756876742007-04-04T16:10:00.000-05:002007-04-04T16:10:00.000-05:00Cool!Cool!Steve Malleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17561234111786788616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-27456772112857104932007-04-04T13:29:00.000-05:002007-04-04T13:29:00.000-05:00Sweet! This was absolutely awesome! I loved the li...Sweet! This was absolutely awesome! I loved the line “Die scum!” he shouted. <BR/>It reminded me of something I would read in an old comic book. And the story had that twist at the end that blew me away. Very good, very cool!Lucas Pedersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13072101177732602824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-47672287040601299092007-04-04T12:46:00.000-05:002007-04-04T12:46:00.000-05:00Thanks, Kate. This was from a challenge by Lucas,...Thanks, Kate. This was from a challenge by Lucas, of course. I'm late getting my response in. Glad you enjoyed "Dark Wind."Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-79309381597953294872007-04-04T12:35:00.000-05:002007-04-04T12:35:00.000-05:00Wow. Good stuff - very intriguing. By the way, I d...Wow. Good stuff - very intriguing. <BR/><BR/>By the way, I don't think I ever told you I got your story from the pet charity - it was good too.RK Sterlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01034917381901499281noreply@blogger.com