tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post1545803010434279040..comments2024-02-12T17:59:33.534-06:00Comments on RAZORED ZEN: Halloween Flash #6Charles Gramlichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comBlogger41125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-18490612253099619712008-10-28T19:00:00.000-05:002008-10-28T19:00:00.000-05:00LOL @ Lana"No moon.A sky flecked like mica with st...LOL @ Lana<BR/><BR/>"No moon.<BR/><BR/>A sky flecked like mica with stars."<BR/><BR/>LOVED that opening :DMiladysahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08065128196666157541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-33483680177025211252008-10-28T14:55:00.000-05:002008-10-28T14:55:00.000-05:00Vesper, it's linked on my post for today.Avery, ne...Vesper, it's linked on my post for today.<BR/><BR/>Avery, next I take on kittens.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-68034198765381656712008-10-28T14:21:00.000-05:002008-10-28T14:21:00.000-05:00"And in other news, recent adoptions of puppies at..."And in other news, recent adoptions of puppies at local shelters have dropped significantly..."AvDBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16574481780173046619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-43631198746835127952008-10-28T10:50:00.000-05:002008-10-28T10:50:00.000-05:00Ah, that's more like it! I LOVE it!Thanks for offe...Ah, that's more like it! I LOVE it!<BR/><BR/>Thanks for offering to put a link to my story on your blog. I'm very honoured. :-)Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-35417873206439810602008-10-28T10:40:00.000-05:002008-10-28T10:40:00.000-05:00Ello, this actually had the exact same beginning a...Ello, this actually had the exact same beginning as that other story. I just altered the ending.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-35205993893955132782008-10-28T09:37:00.000-05:002008-10-28T09:37:00.000-05:00oh gosh! this reminded me at first of that other, ...oh gosh! this reminded me at first of that other, more lovely story you had at Jason's contest. I think you won with that one. But then this story went horribly wrong! How creepy and unexpected! I crown you Flash Fiction Horror King!Ello - Ellen Ohhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311917335471167591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-84611904658009947902008-10-28T07:58:00.000-05:002008-10-28T07:58:00.000-05:00David, I'm always interested in folks' take on wri...David, I'm always interested in folks' take on writing. I've learned a lot of things from unusual places.<BR/><BR/>Laughingwolf, cool, I'll link it to my current post and then add it to the next one as well.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-7007909250428324132008-10-28T06:07:00.000-05:002008-10-28T06:07:00.000-05:00XI is up :O lolXI is up :O lollaughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-49351541058325859842008-10-28T04:14:00.000-05:002008-10-28T04:14:00.000-05:00You would have so enjoyed the lectures of one of m...You would have so enjoyed the lectures of one of my teachers, a wise Jesuit called Fr Victor Tucker. <BR/><BR/>He taught us so much about construction of stories - and I still use those principles in my novels.<BR/><BR/>Fr Tucker was one of the many teachers I thanked in the acknowledgement section of my first novel.david mcmahonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18009095220051075552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-37282748927545500902008-10-27T23:14:00.000-05:002008-10-27T23:14:00.000-05:00Demon hunter, glad you thought it was sick. perfe...Demon hunter, glad you thought it was sick. perfect.<BR/><BR/>Ivan, glad you enjoyed.<BR/><BR/>Heff, as long as it doesn't interfere with beer drinking I might give it a try.<BR/><BR/>David Cranmer, thanks David. I appreciate the kind words. So glad you are enjoying them.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-36100523136321615292008-10-27T22:07:00.000-05:002008-10-27T22:07:00.000-05:00The Best one yet! I wanted more.The Best one yet! I wanted more.David Cranmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04749857752139212888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-60904336802736023542008-10-27T16:31:00.000-05:002008-10-27T16:31:00.000-05:00Man, you should write books or somethin'.Man, you should write books or somethin'.Heffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13396114362826135207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-33996957797025671782008-10-27T13:20:00.000-05:002008-10-27T13:20:00.000-05:00Oh, that is scary.Backdrop of evil and danger, no ...Oh, that <EM>is</EM> scary.<BR/><BR/>Backdrop of evil and danger, no matter what you do.<BR/><BR/>Wow.ivanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05662075375182633162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-45192708634686233092008-10-27T12:02:00.000-05:002008-10-27T12:02:00.000-05:00Awww, sick, I love it, Charles!! :-DAwww, sick, I love it, Charles!! <BR/>:-DTyhitia Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14070000168178880911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-20183621807253755612008-10-27T09:53:00.000-05:002008-10-27T09:53:00.000-05:00Sarah, thanks. I really have the urge often times...Sarah, thanks. I really have the urge often times to write very different stories. Sometimes I like sentimental, sometimes gory, sometimes straight reportage.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-30692407207622030992008-10-27T09:52:00.001-05:002008-10-27T09:52:00.001-05:00Erik, good!Barrie, yes, this one hurts, I think.Ma...Erik, good!<BR/><BR/>Barrie, yes, this one hurts, I think.<BR/><BR/>Mark, depends on how messed up it is.<BR/><BR/>Bernardl, and so you see that Lana is right. I'm a sick bastard.<BR/><BR/>Shadowfalcon, I didn't know that but I can imagine doing that myself.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-88621835471803744042008-10-27T09:52:00.000-05:002008-10-27T09:52:00.000-05:00Charles, from summer warm to Halloween chill. I wi...Charles, from summer warm to Halloween chill. I will never stop to help a dog again! ;) <BR/><BR/>I loved your contest entry. But this is a wicked, effective revision. Love the title, too.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-4011763646240700882008-10-27T08:13:00.000-05:002008-10-27T08:13:00.000-05:00this is random but about twist endings did you kno...this is random but about twist endings did you know its claimed that Agatha Christie didn't decide who the killer was until the last chapter and then she'd go back through the novel and plant clues...<BR/><BR/>btw freaky story...ShadowFalconhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15705530281109481071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-46681709347820800562008-10-27T08:05:00.000-05:002008-10-27T08:05:00.000-05:00Heck of a variation on your contest winner. :)Heck of a variation on your contest winner. :)BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-53211775175858422262008-10-27T04:13:00.000-05:002008-10-27T04:13:00.000-05:00Thanks Charles, now I will be leery of eating road...Thanks Charles, now I will be leery of eating roadkill!the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-48338495429519553072008-10-27T04:12:00.000-05:002008-10-27T04:12:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-61494062270429316342008-10-27T00:28:00.000-05:002008-10-27T00:28:00.000-05:00Yikes. Yikes. Yikes.Yikes. Yikes. Yikes.Barriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04678698296265168217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-17594425420418257662008-10-27T00:14:00.000-05:002008-10-27T00:14:00.000-05:00Visceral, man. Ouch!Visceral, man. Ouch!Erik Donald Francehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02332500850365598564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-10711679447456063952008-10-26T23:13:00.000-05:002008-10-26T23:13:00.000-05:00Steve Malley, death by a thousand puppies. Sounds...Steve Malley, death by a thousand puppies. Sounds like a great title. There's definitely a little black humor in this one.<BR/><BR/>Will, LOL. I shot beer out my nose at that one. Hop like the wind.<BR/><BR/>x-dell, with a much nastier ending.<BR/><BR/>Writtenwyrd, thanks. Really gross is what it is.<BR/><BR/>Sidney, I'm going to do 2 more, the last one on the 30th to carry us through halloween.<BR/><BR/>Greg, and grosser. Which is good.<BR/><BR/>Jo, thanks. I'd sure like to make a bit of his money.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-10785722395635662302008-10-26T23:09:00.000-05:002008-10-26T23:09:00.000-05:00Omigosh, I love it.Stephen King, move over...Omigosh, I love it.<BR/><BR/>Stephen King, move over...Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03382221688268676914noreply@blogger.com