tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post1112424272179253666..comments2024-02-12T17:59:33.534-06:00Comments on RAZORED ZEN: Under the Ember StarCharles Gramlichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-61671455130206379122011-05-07T14:19:26.013-05:002011-05-07T14:19:26.013-05:00Good stuff, Charles! I'm excited to see where...Good stuff, Charles! I'm excited to see where this leads.RK Sterlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01034917381901499281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-658768229470489702011-05-07T14:14:18.013-05:002011-05-07T14:14:18.013-05:00Golden Eagle,yeah it sounds pretty good.
Steve Ma...Golden Eagle,yeah it sounds pretty good.<br /><br />Steve Malley, it's good huntin' :)Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-78737717567353452662011-05-06T17:09:32.424-05:002011-05-06T17:09:32.424-05:00Ooh, gotta love that feeling when you're hot o...Ooh, gotta love that feeling when you're hot on the trail of a good story thread... Jealous! :)Steve Malleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17561234111786788616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-57945340390233717282011-05-06T12:39:00.167-05:002011-05-06T12:39:00.167-05:00I can't really think of any other H names--but...I can't really think of any other H names--but I think "Hollis" is good.<br /><br />I love the excerpt you posted!Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-28585550465339095462011-05-06T11:31:21.124-05:002011-05-06T11:31:21.124-05:00Richard, hadn't thought of the three name thin...Richard, hadn't thought of the three name thing. That actually has a nice flow to it. May be late in the book when she gives the three. Good idea.<br /><br />Ivan, I toyed with the Amber, but I was afraid the title and the focus on the sun would interfere with the readers' ability to keep the character and the sun separate.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-87612251612712531292011-05-06T09:59:48.012-05:002011-05-06T09:59:48.012-05:00Good plot.
Myself, I plot like I make love-- badl...Good plot.<br /><br />Myself, I plot like I make love-- badly.<br /><br />My feeling for the heroine's name, is that it should be Amber Starr-- somewhat translucent, permanent,sort of a reflection<br />of the Big Ember that she is under.ivanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05662075375182633162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-25714082135829385802011-05-06T09:53:08.337-05:002011-05-06T09:53:08.337-05:00I like Patti's suggestion, or maybe a three wo...I like Patti's suggestion, or maybe a three word name. Ginn Lynn Hollis or something like that. Sounds like a cool story!Richard Proschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08314680709014254183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-58330814671218465142011-05-05T20:34:37.812-05:002011-05-05T20:34:37.812-05:00Patty, I like the H and L sounds with that. nice....Patty, I like the H and L sounds with that. nice.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-6867102981921907562011-05-05T11:04:12.589-05:002011-05-05T11:04:12.589-05:00Ginn Hollinger popped into my head. Like the repet...Ginn Hollinger popped into my head. Like the repetition of consonants. Sounds terrific.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-48102586756578206892011-05-05T09:31:22.119-05:002011-05-05T09:31:22.119-05:00Cloudia, that's a pretty good compliment. Tha...Cloudia, that's a pretty good compliment. Thankee.<br /><br />Laughingwolf, probably not.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-42203141095316805762011-05-05T07:34:10.646-05:002011-05-05T07:34:10.646-05:00go for it, charles... no need for another name for...go for it, charles... no need for another name for her!laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-56569063747527610082011-05-04T23:55:34.914-05:002011-05-04T23:55:34.914-05:00You have a Verne mind!
Warm Aloha from Waikiki...You have a Verne mind!<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Warm Aloha from Waikiki<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /><br />><}}(°><br /><br /> <br /> ><}}(°>Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-68230882831718853922011-05-04T23:45:03.726-05:002011-05-04T23:45:03.726-05:00Carole, I may no even need a last name the way the...Carole, I may no even need a last name the way the story is going.<br /><br />Travis Erwin, I will be posting more about it as I go along.<br /><br />Ron Scheer, I've never had a Ginn Fizz. :)<br /><br />David J. West, thankee.<br /> <br />Hanny, It does seem to flow with the first name.<br /><br /> Travis Cody, I like that. Harker. It's got the hard K sound that is good. I am figuring it's Ginn with a "j"<br /> <br />Randy Johnson, I figure you like Moore and Brackett so maybe it'll be something you'll enjoy.<br /><br />Vesper, harley is nice. I may have to try that one on for size.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-7864418860711757982011-05-04T22:06:40.627-05:002011-05-04T22:06:40.627-05:00I love it, Charles! Yeah, it does sound great. A c...I love it, Charles! Yeah, it does sound great. A cool girl.<br /><br /><i>...though I have no idea what the solution is myself yet. That’s part of the fun of writing. </i> - I couldn't agree more!<br /><br />Halley Harley Harper...Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-76670109924416120112011-05-04T22:06:05.200-05:002011-05-04T22:06:05.200-05:00Looking forward to this one.Looking forward to this one.Randy Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16627907086811387527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-55035547036842262712011-05-04T21:22:31.165-05:002011-05-04T21:22:31.165-05:00Harker.
That just flowed as I read the name Ginn....Harker.<br /><br />That just flowed as I read the name Ginn. I pronounced Ginn with a "j" sound, but I think Harker works OK if it's Ginn with a hard "g".Travis Codyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06192526507760146748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-66162054928921726682011-05-04T21:13:07.927-05:002011-05-04T21:13:07.927-05:00Hollis sounds really natural--I'd keep it.Hollis sounds really natural--I'd keep it.Hannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05936315047570120258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-58638896820421307972011-05-04T18:33:19.814-05:002011-05-04T18:33:19.814-05:00Looking forward to it.Looking forward to it.nephite blood spartan hearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17092519999184585295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-67077116663322614642011-05-04T16:39:30.745-05:002011-05-04T16:39:30.745-05:00Single names are good. But if you need a last one,...Single names are good. But if you need a last one, how about Fizz?Ron Scheerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15357501069513854664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-25209873627882978562011-05-04T16:26:07.933-05:002011-05-04T16:26:07.933-05:00Good stuff. can't wait to read more.Good stuff. can't wait to read more.Travis Erwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09420879160702098979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-66013384933993212082011-05-04T15:11:27.372-05:002011-05-04T15:11:27.372-05:00Sounds very good. I do not have a good last name ...Sounds very good. I do not have a good last name that starts with an H so Hollis seems fine. I do hope you find the perfect name.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03828426520214270655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-58843113559563294232011-05-04T12:48:39.006-05:002011-05-04T12:48:39.006-05:00Bernardl, I like Hollis. It doesn't seem perf...Bernardl, I like Hollis. It doesn't seem perfect though. Not like Josh Allen Boone or Ruenn Maclang.<br /><br />Deka, that's my inside track name so far.<br /><br />Alex, thankee. I'm a sucker for those old types of titles.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-28000545923591238832011-05-04T12:41:43.816-05:002011-05-04T12:41:43.816-05:00You know I like space operas! Like the working tit...You know I like space operas! Like the working title.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-54379681902714595292011-05-04T12:10:56.789-05:002011-05-04T12:10:56.789-05:00Space opera. Good! About the "H" thing.....Space opera. Good! About the "H" thing...I'm with bernard. Hollis sounds good.Deka Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08328847551867893941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-6164959114237561662011-05-04T11:24:49.873-05:002011-05-04T11:24:49.873-05:00I think you have a winner, and I like Hollis for t...I think you have a winner, and I like Hollis for the name.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.com