tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post8337503262589761130..comments2024-02-12T17:59:33.534-06:00Comments on RAZORED ZEN: Kate Wilhelm, StorytellerCharles Gramlichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-57222860906977986552008-02-26T08:31:00.000-06:002008-02-26T08:31:00.000-06:00Danette, cool.Barrie, I will, although since I'm i...Danette, cool.<BR/><BR/>Barrie, I will, although since I'm in mid-semester right now it might be a while. Thanks for stopping by.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-80451261524972669122008-02-25T23:13:00.000-06:002008-02-25T23:13:00.000-06:00Any chance you'll share what you come up with on t...Any chance you'll share what you come up with on the Dean Koontz front? :)Barriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04678698296265168217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-77465840051663124712008-02-25T21:16:00.000-06:002008-02-25T21:16:00.000-06:00Charles,Timely post--I'm revising a manuscript rig...Charles,<BR/>Timely post--I'm revising a manuscript right now.Danette Haworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13220718895967380788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-27366673871605200642008-02-25T15:21:00.000-06:002008-02-25T15:21:00.000-06:00Sarai, Wow. Cool! Thanks. I appreciate it. Cer...Sarai, Wow. Cool! Thanks. I appreciate it. Certainly not an interruption.<BR/><BR/>Miladysa, yes, it would be something well worth seeing. I definitely wouldn't have time to do a whole book but maybe a piece of one.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-83575210495747724192008-02-25T13:59:00.000-06:002008-02-25T13:59:00.000-06:00I would love to see some of my favourite books mar...I would love to see some of my favourite books marked up in this way but would struggle to find the time to do it though.<BR/><BR/>I am very tempted to try with my own writing :-D<BR/><BR/>Another great tip Charles - Thank you!Miladysahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08065128196666157541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-53358075928218794972008-02-25T13:48:00.000-06:002008-02-25T13:48:00.000-06:00So I feel silly doing this here and ruining a good...So I feel silly doing this here and ruining a good post but I have no way to email you. You won the Play it forward contest. Let me know what you would like and I will get it out in the mail this week!<BR/>(sorry for the interruption)Saraihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00203551997160640352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-85083348063607463112008-02-25T12:28:00.000-06:002008-02-25T12:28:00.000-06:00Josephine, thanks for the heads up on the contest....Josephine, thanks for the heads up on the contest. The index cards thing is a good idea. I wouldn't necessarily do something like that every time I write but it would be interesting to do as a revelation of technique. Probably be surprising. <BR/><BR/>Sarai, Wilhelm's is a good one, although there is a lot of history of the Clarion conference there that is not heavy on technique. It's still worth a read, I thought.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-1241545452177828482008-02-25T11:14:00.000-06:002008-02-25T11:14:00.000-06:00Thanks for the suggestion on writing books. I love...Thanks for the suggestion on writing books. I love seeing what other authors use to improve their craft. <BR/>Need to check out this book.Saraihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00203551997160640352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-76963611366236890622008-02-25T08:57:00.000-06:002008-02-25T08:57:00.000-06:00Charles: FYI - the BookEnds gals started their ero...Charles: FYI - the BookEnds gals started their erotic romance :-O<BR/>contest today, but said they're NOT going to follow the list next time - possibly the thrillers could be next...Josephine Damianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17952030380866201241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-18106686141101302572008-02-25T08:53:00.000-06:002008-02-25T08:53:00.000-06:00Charles, great idea to use colored pencils or mark...Charles, great idea to use colored pencils or markers. I've also seen it suggested for people who use index cards to outline to use different colored cards for plot and subplot, and use different color for each character. If you have too many subplot/secondary characters colored cards then you have a problem.Josephine Damianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17952030380866201241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-88830264086070339212008-02-25T08:52:00.000-06:002008-02-25T08:52:00.000-06:00Shauna, my problem with conveying emotion is tryin...Shauna, my problem with conveying emotion is trying to find new ways of doing it without falling back on the cliches, which are cliche because many of them are accurate.<BR/><BR/>Donnetta, thanks.<BR/><BR/>Anna-lys, thanks for stopping by. I appreciate it.<BR/><BR/>Demon Hunter, it's been useful to me.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-13143143350653459932008-02-25T08:18:00.000-06:002008-02-25T08:18:00.000-06:00Very interesting, Charles. Thanks for sharing this...Very interesting, Charles. Thanks for sharing this. It definitely sounds like a useful technique. :*)Tyhitia Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14070000168178880911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-83008123674103040722008-02-25T07:20:00.000-06:002008-02-25T07:20:00.000-06:00HiFound You @ Fancy's blog, and had to walk by. Wi...Hi<BR/>Found You @ Fancy's blog, and had to walk by. Will certainly be back within short :-)ANNA-LYShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03503734017177492952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-69520676189219021752008-02-24T18:10:00.000-06:002008-02-24T18:10:00.000-06:00Good thinking, Charles. I'll try it.DonnettaGood thinking, Charles. I'll try it.<BR/>DonnettaDonnettahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14831771508607746472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-41553707195394328412008-02-24T18:08:00.000-06:002008-02-24T18:08:00.000-06:00Some romance writers use a similar system to track...Some romance writers use a similar system to track whether they have enough emotion and whether it builds properly through a scene. <BR/><BR/>My characters have a bad habit of reacting to every disaster with only analysis and action, so I've found the system useful for figuring out where to add emotional responses.Shauna Robertshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03871768714926149114noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-82463287470388592022008-02-24T17:32:00.000-06:002008-02-24T17:32:00.000-06:00Billy, I'll obey the commands of the meme next tim...Billy, I'll obey the commands of the meme next time I post, probably Monday.<BR/><BR/>Jack, it actually works out fairly well.<BR/><BR/>Steve Malley, cool. Glad you got them. <BR/><BR/>Fancy, thanks, I've added you to my blog list.<BR/><BR/>Ivan, I think there is a legitimate concern. I think for me, writing has become so habitual that I'm not sure I could alter my basic pattern without a tremendous effort, even if I found out I should.<BR/><BR/>Julie, it would probably be a good idea to use something like this to look at, say, a sample submission package.<BR/><BR/>Travis Erwin, it's a challenging exercise.<BR/><BR/>Travis, yes, may be. If you have a section that can't be defined then maybe it is a problem. Good point.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-66098907985535445722008-02-24T16:20:00.000-06:002008-02-24T16:20:00.000-06:00I like this idea. It seems like this could also a...I like this idea. It seems like this could also assist in editing. Like if you have a bunch of sections that you can't classify as action or character or setting or something else of real note, then you might just have a bunch of words that aren't necessary to the story.Travis Codyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06192526507760146748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-9844316248463857802008-02-24T16:09:00.000-06:002008-02-24T16:09:00.000-06:00Interesting concpet. I'm gonna try this one.Interesting concpet. I'm gonna try this one.Travis Erwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09420879160702098979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-44734727634771797242008-02-24T14:53:00.000-06:002008-02-24T14:53:00.000-06:00Charles, someone made a comment on editing their m...Charles, someone made a comment on editing their m/s (WIP) like this on Bernita's a while back, and a few people picked it up as a good idea<BR/>for dealing with submissions. Included things like dialogue, POV etc.virtual nexushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955335598875413324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-16728063180933922732008-02-24T14:20:00.000-06:002008-02-24T14:20:00.000-06:00Enough of the amateur left in me to beware of tink...Enough of the amateur left in me to beware of tinkering with the process.<BR/>Like watching your fingers while you type. Big "Clang!" coming up for sure.<BR/>If you look at all good writing, almost blow on the words, perhaps, you might find it's just made of fairy stuff and bits and pieces of filigree.<BR/>If you trace the finished product all the way back, you might find just sunworms, or even worms.<BR/><BR/>I tried Ms. Wilhelm's process on a very fine novel c. l962, <EM>The Magus</EM>, by John Fowles. Just found, as I say, filigree and even the worms of Mr. Fowles' experience underneath the fine writing.<BR/><BR/>It might be sh*t that had produced the flower in the first place and you might not want to dig that deep.<BR/><BR/>My opinion, anyway.ivanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05662075375182633162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-30310018776599351832008-02-24T14:07:00.000-06:002008-02-24T14:07:00.000-06:00Hello ...Maybe you want to drop by...You are in my...Hello ...<BR/><BR/>Maybe you want to drop by...You are in my site...*LOL*FANCYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02608983168583167889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-85271182938089980252008-02-24T13:13:00.000-06:002008-02-24T13:13:00.000-06:00That's one kind of balance I've never thought to l...That's one kind of balance I've never thought to look at. Thanks!<BR/><BR/>By the way, your books arrived yesterday. *Totally* stoked!!Steve Malleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17561234111786788616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-59177849975745702152008-02-24T12:45:00.000-06:002008-02-24T12:45:00.000-06:00That sounds like an interesting exercise. I like ...That sounds like an interesting exercise. I like the idea of the rainbow effect.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-38637360329526349872008-02-24T11:01:00.000-06:002008-02-24T11:01:00.000-06:00I'm not big on conventional exercises, but I rathe...I'm not big on conventional exercises, but I rather like this one. Thanks for sharing.<BR/><BR/>And thanks to your wife, you've been tagged -:) <A HREF="http://william-hammett.blogspot.com/2008/02/getting-tagged-was-easier-in-school.html" REL="nofollow">You're tagged</A>WHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815646433314236886noreply@blogger.com