tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post5528287018467236003..comments2024-02-12T17:59:33.534-06:00Comments on RAZORED ZEN: Halloween Flash #3Charles Gramlichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-36448739087205102342008-10-19T11:27:00.000-05:002008-10-19T11:27:00.000-05:00X-dell, maybe winged Harleys.Vesper, glad you like...X-dell, maybe winged Harleys.<BR/><BR/>Vesper, glad you liked it.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-43152146115719964212008-10-17T11:11:00.000-05:002008-10-17T11:11:00.000-05:00The reality of angels.... Excellent!The reality of angels.... Excellent!Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-39567130273718679902008-10-17T00:47:00.000-05:002008-10-17T00:47:00.000-05:00They sound like Hell's Angels. They weren't ridin...They sound like Hell's Angels. They weren't riding Harleys, were they?X. Dellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17561609651507566271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-29785270209259179572008-10-16T07:46:00.000-05:002008-10-16T07:46:00.000-05:00Mary, glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the kind words...Mary, glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the kind words.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-17745442673403754992008-10-16T00:12:00.000-05:002008-10-16T00:12:00.000-05:00I loved the imagery in this -- the metallic trees,...I loved the imagery in this -- the metallic trees, the sense of being nourished by breathing in the atmosphere -- and the end caught me entirely off guard. Very eerie and Halloween-like and I'll be looking out for those angels...Mary Witzlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06458299046574564155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-72361380391124906782008-10-15T21:47:00.000-05:002008-10-15T21:47:00.000-05:00Scott, sounds interesting. Been a lot of that sor...Scott, sounds interesting. Been a lot of that sort of thing going around. Have you ever seen the "Prophecy," the one about the angel war?<BR/><BR/>Mimi, thank you.<BR/><BR/>Travis, yeah, I sort of pictured the angels as indifferent and superior, not necessarily evil but simply uncaring.<BR/><BR/>Lana, no you.<BR/><BR/>JR, thanks for the compliment.<BR/><BR/>Donnetta, creepy is definitely good.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-26192082542417343392008-10-15T21:15:00.000-05:002008-10-15T21:15:00.000-05:00Oh, you know I love these creepy ones. And I love ...Oh, you know I love these creepy ones. And I love the shorties. Enjoyed. Twas fun. DDonnettahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14831771508607746472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-84093233078431250352008-10-15T19:51:00.000-05:002008-10-15T19:51:00.000-05:00No wax build-up here; story had a nice flow to it....No wax build-up here; story had a nice flow to it.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-65811753974454927452008-10-15T18:58:00.000-05:002008-10-15T18:58:00.000-05:00Good one, you twisted bastard (I mean that w/the u...Good one, you twisted bastard (I mean that w/the utmost respect, of course. ;)Lana Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06975996208260144558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-7567123694880121262008-10-15T18:36:00.000-05:002008-10-15T18:36:00.000-05:00Hmmmmm. I like how this doesn't commit the "angel...Hmmmmm. I like how this doesn't commit the "angels" to good or evil. That makes it a bit creepier.Travis Codyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06192526507760146748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-83273515584779318932008-10-15T18:16:00.000-05:002008-10-15T18:16:00.000-05:00I agree with Rick. That was rather Poe-ish...I agree with Rick. That was rather Poe-ish...Mimi Lenoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01616635898420835541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-53284827893103361242008-10-15T15:56:00.000-05:002008-10-15T15:56:00.000-05:00Now that I think of it, this reminds me of a japan...Now that I think of it, this reminds me of a japanese comic I read titled "Bastard". The heroes recently doscovered the 'evil' forces they've been fighting have been angels...it seems God wants the human race destroyed because of our inherent sins and sin potential...it's an interseting concept, especially in a comic book.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09726570487056061877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-74147810369919638092008-10-15T13:27:00.000-05:002008-10-15T13:27:00.000-05:00Sarah, thank you very much.Merisi, great lines fro...Sarah, thank you very much.<BR/><BR/>Merisi, great lines from Coleridge. A fantastic poet.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-47388187334745542012008-10-15T12:09:00.000-05:002008-10-15T12:09:00.000-05:00"How by the desultory breeze caress'd,", those ang..."<I>How by the desultory breeze caress'd,</I>", those angels, "<I>which better far were mute</I>"?<BR/>;-)Merisihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781937797213521146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-9403494742196304332008-10-15T10:20:00.000-05:002008-10-15T10:20:00.000-05:00Fantastic, Charles. You captured the hellish side ...Fantastic, Charles. You captured the hellish side of Heaven. <BR/><BR/>Your language is so powerful here. I loved some of these descriptions. And the last sentence was perfect.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-9739361936728283712008-10-15T10:03:00.000-05:002008-10-15T10:03:00.000-05:00Miladysa, ;)Greg, I always figured angels were pre...Miladysa, ;)<BR/><BR/>Greg, I always figured angels were pretty scary beings.<BR/><BR/>L.A., cool. I'll check it out and link it up here with my post tomorrow.<BR/><BR/>Laughingwolf, indeed.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-52792155903902745872008-10-15T08:35:00.000-05:002008-10-15T08:35:00.000-05:00figgered it'd GET to ye ;) lolfiggered it'd GET to ye ;) lollaughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-37066332609051271122008-10-15T08:33:00.000-05:002008-10-15T08:33:00.000-05:00Angels are such a powerful symbol. Loved it, Char...Angels are such a powerful symbol. Loved it, Charles. I couldn't let all this inspiration go to waste, so I wrote my own flash :)L.A. Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11729129827211991040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-43417759882817816012008-10-15T05:53:00.000-05:002008-10-15T05:53:00.000-05:00creepy story! makes me a little scared of going t...creepy story! makes me a little scared of going to heaven.Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15344808703550376121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-61326952908118948112008-10-15T03:16:00.000-05:002008-10-15T03:16:00.000-05:00*gulp*Scary...*gulp*<BR/><BR/>Scary...Miladysahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08065128196666157541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-9675475340018186662008-10-14T23:34:00.000-05:002008-10-14T23:34:00.000-05:00Avery, I like your halloween avatar. Cool. Yeah, ...Avery, I like your halloween avatar. Cool. Yeah, you can't trust angels.<BR/><BR/>Travis Erwin, glad you liked it.<BR/><BR/>Crazycath, thanks. I appreciate the good words.<BR/><BR/>Steve Malley, that would be cool, dude.<BR/><BR/>Laughingwolf, yes, very insane laughter.<BR/><BR/>Aine, thankee. Yeah, metal trees are kind of cool. I've used 'em before.<BR/><BR/>Ivan, but I'm not that vain.<BR/><BR/>Scott, I've been religious, off and on, but was very religious as a kid raised in a Catholic home.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-33288599461189485822008-10-14T20:35:00.000-05:002008-10-14T20:35:00.000-05:00Charles, this one is probably my favorite so far. ...Charles, this one is probably my favorite so far. I have always been fascinated by angels and devils, even though I've never been religious.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09726570487056061877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-51508144501550658572008-10-14T16:41:00.000-05:002008-10-14T16:41:00.000-05:00Killing you softly with their song?Killing you softly with their song?ivanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05662075375182633162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-49211727734745495902008-10-14T16:38:00.000-05:002008-10-14T16:38:00.000-05:00Yikes. Figured those "angel" figures were too goo...Yikes. Figured those "angel" figures were too good to be true....<BR/><BR/>I love the idea of metal flora. Interesting....Ainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08402176500997528105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-84452760551749734572008-10-14T16:26:00.000-05:002008-10-14T16:26:00.000-05:00i could hear your sheer, raucous laughter as you p...i could hear your sheer, raucous laughter as you played your b'day card, charles :P lollaughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.com