tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post3236387399875114854..comments2024-02-12T17:59:33.534-06:00Comments on RAZORED ZEN: Drear SkyCharles Gramlichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-30612584837241827502013-12-13T12:44:18.046-06:002013-12-13T12:44:18.046-06:00eric1313, thanks, man!eric1313, thanks, man!Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-34762161740997984322013-12-12T23:06:44.756-06:002013-12-12T23:06:44.756-06:00Nice! You have the poetic narrative down. Nice! You have the poetic narrative down. eric1313https://www.blogger.com/profile/13807078704660045859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-23539689305577102492013-12-12T23:05:40.645-06:002013-12-12T23:05:40.645-06:00Nice! You have the poetic narrative down. Nice! You have the poetic narrative down. eric1313https://www.blogger.com/profile/13807078704660045859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-61581652390032927762013-12-12T20:04:52.501-06:002013-12-12T20:04:52.501-06:00Riot kitty, I don't mind a little cold.
Sarah...Riot kitty, I don't mind a little cold.<br /><br />Sarah Allen, thanks. I appreciate that.<br />Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-33906832553759518852013-12-12T14:11:07.005-06:002013-12-12T14:11:07.005-06:00Wow. Beautiful.
Sarah Allen
(From Sarah, With Joy...Wow. Beautiful.<br /><br /><a href="http://fromsarahwithjoy.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Sarah Allen<br />(From Sarah, With Joy></a>Sarah Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01185278849400551014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-15063751819307791982013-12-12T13:59:14.181-06:002013-12-12T13:59:14.181-06:00I can't either. To me, it's just cold.
Ni...I can't either. To me, it's just cold.<br /><br />Nice poem though.Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-56008624678248661572013-12-12T09:30:00.454-06:002013-12-12T09:30:00.454-06:00Ron, glad you enjoyed.
Erik, once in a while I be...Ron, glad you enjoyed.<br /><br />Erik, once in a while I become aware of my surroundings. Not too often. :)<br /><br />Ivan, no doubt any poem attempting meaning might be 'failing'. Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-40905473255038448492013-12-11T18:22:25.419-06:002013-12-11T18:22:25.419-06:00Meaning might be a poem falling.Meaning might be a poem falling.ivanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05662075375182633162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-92062177058705007342013-12-11T14:18:20.861-06:002013-12-11T14:18:20.861-06:00I dig it ~ the awareness.I dig it ~ the awareness.Erik Donald Francehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02332500850365598564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-38439480392782961172013-12-11T13:45:15.655-06:002013-12-11T13:45:15.655-06:00A well expressed meditation on what's all arou...A well expressed meditation on what's all around us when we just shut up and listen. Thanks, bud.Ron Scheerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15357501069513854664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-61189457211190828212013-12-11T12:58:30.623-06:002013-12-11T12:58:30.623-06:00Prashant, thanks. I do write it on occassion, thou...Prashant, thanks. I do write it on occassion, though it's fairly uncommon.<br /><br />Bernard, thanks, man.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-76397675549554012622013-12-11T09:59:17.963-06:002013-12-11T09:59:17.963-06:00Enjoyed it very much, my friend.Enjoyed it very much, my friend.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-59375847232414487262013-12-11T09:32:21.463-06:002013-12-11T09:32:21.463-06:00Charles, I detected the poet in you long back. I l...Charles, I detected the poet in you long back. I liked the third stanza the best. And I hope you continue to write poetry.Prashant C. Trikannadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16079354501998741758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-64440169793389228602013-12-11T09:14:09.957-06:002013-12-11T09:14:09.957-06:00Cloudia, glad you enjoyed. I wrote it while waitin...Cloudia, glad you enjoyed. I wrote it while waiting for students to finish up a test. Didn't even have to make many edits after it was done.<br /><br />Keith, yeah, I remember some of the less pleasant poetry from school. convinced me I didn't like poetry until in college I found different kinds.<br /><br />Mark, thanks, man. I appreciate it.<br /><br />Brian, yes, something to felt rather than known really.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-85047906293715100152013-12-11T08:07:00.223-06:002013-12-11T08:07:00.223-06:00some things we are just to experience and not worr...some things we are just to experience and not worry about figuring out you know...just to be in nature and alive and listen...there is mystery and there is rhythm that speaks to us deeply...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-30352577661004715342013-12-11T07:05:45.587-06:002013-12-11T07:05:45.587-06:00It is a beautiful piece Charles defining well in t...It is a beautiful piece Charles defining well in the last verse that some things are scary and unfathomable but also a part of the natural world around us. I like this quite a lot.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-45634053740970252012013-12-10T23:06:43.692-06:002013-12-10T23:06:43.692-06:00Why couldn't we have read more poetry like thi...Why couldn't we have read more poetry like this in school?Adventuresfantastichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16907562789681407416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-17137924736933937222013-12-10T21:46:33.918-06:002013-12-10T21:46:33.918-06:00This is probably my favorite work of yours, Charle...This is probably my favorite work of yours, Charles, Ineffable. <br />Sussuration! Yours?<br /><br />Such is the IS-ness of Life; yes,<br />all around us...<br /><br />This really speaks to the soul.<br /><br />ALOHA to YOU<br />from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> =^..^= <3<br /> > < } } ( ° >Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-89179946200753488132013-12-10T20:51:19.249-06:002013-12-10T20:51:19.249-06:00Alex, listen closely.
Rachel, thanks.
Ty, sweet ...Alex, listen closely.<br /><br />Rachel, thanks.<br /><br />Ty, sweet mystery of life.<br /><br />Lana, thankee sweetness<br /><br />Patti, glad you enjoyed.<br /><br />Sage, I enjoy me some nature.<br /><br />Jodi, i'm not sure I do. :)<br />Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-12085495135471419842013-12-10T19:34:50.280-06:002013-12-10T19:34:50.280-06:00Charles-Oh I think you totally 'get it'!Charles-Oh I think you totally 'get it'!jodihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01798858210138821711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-81323692109297955412013-12-10T18:32:27.118-06:002013-12-10T18:32:27.118-06:00All is a mystery... nice to see you playing around...All is a mystery... nice to see you playing around with nature!<br />sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-54416157309203480812013-12-10T18:02:18.958-06:002013-12-10T18:02:18.958-06:00Some lovely images here. Thanks. Some lovely images here. Thanks. pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-20069240489718146862013-12-10T18:01:59.980-06:002013-12-10T18:01:59.980-06:00Love it, baby.Love it, baby.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17705213191926173189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-69580698628594166122013-12-10T17:08:56.327-06:002013-12-10T17:08:56.327-06:00No mystery.
It's chickens. :-)
Or at least i...No mystery.<br /><br />It's chickens. :-)<br /><br />Or at least it would be around my place.<br /><br />Very nice, by the way.Tyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09192814826756623212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-25790135623900985102013-12-10T16:04:52.440-06:002013-12-10T16:04:52.440-06:00I like it. I like it. Rachel V. Olivierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08993034871233904955noreply@blogger.com