tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post2114509081389791197..comments2024-02-12T17:59:33.534-06:00Comments on RAZORED ZEN: SCORN #2Charles Gramlichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-61253089975512048062013-09-04T17:50:27.906-05:002013-09-04T17:50:27.906-05:00Jodi, it's got plenty of old threadbare throw ...Jodi, it's got plenty of old threadbare throw pillows and lots of stuffed bunnies. :)<br />Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-87789249089146110522013-09-03T13:23:05.471-05:002013-09-03T13:23:05.471-05:00Charles-I would not be able to live in your head. ...Charles-I would not be able to live in your head. It's a scary place!jodihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01798858210138821711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-20891350443405027022013-09-03T13:13:57.186-05:002013-09-03T13:13:57.186-05:00Patti, thanks. Part of this was indeed from a drea...Patti, thanks. Part of this was indeed from a dream.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-65306959291766258742013-09-03T06:20:54.867-05:002013-09-03T06:20:54.867-05:00I have dreams like this but I never write about th...I have dreams like this but I never write about them. They are too scary to put into words. Very nice when you do it though. pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-39384404197659952772013-09-02T14:02:40.748-05:002013-09-02T14:02:40.748-05:00Richard, I'm a mixture of my influences for su...Richard, I'm a mixture of my influences for sure.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-59784771659299955022013-09-02T09:33:26.749-05:002013-09-02T09:33:26.749-05:00Nice surreal mix of science and fantasy. I like it...Nice surreal mix of science and fantasy. I like it because it can go full circle from Lovecraftian weird to 1950s Superman quirky. (I can see Kal-el of those years walking the barren Earth. How will he get home?)Richard Proschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08314680709014254183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-58177301683406540352013-09-02T09:15:42.167-05:002013-09-02T09:15:42.167-05:00Erik, tis what I was hoping for. :)
mjini, thanks...Erik, tis what I was hoping for. :)<br /><br />mjini, thanks for visiting. I appreciate the kind words.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-40786073507898639522013-09-02T08:01:43.448-05:002013-09-02T08:01:43.448-05:00Hi charles this what you writting is real amazing ...Hi charles this what you writting is real amazing giving me powers has a succssesful writer an publisher to bring hope about any thing that is on your mind what goes around comes back around simple easy life is like that especial for the tycons mjini.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17421315259627142897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-5311801514505047842013-09-01T23:37:59.244-05:002013-09-01T23:37:59.244-05:00Wicked, wicked, wicked.
Wicked, wicked, wicked. <br /><br />Erik Donald Francehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02332500850365598564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-86097312328514420452013-09-01T09:32:31.252-05:002013-09-01T09:32:31.252-05:00Bernard, thanks, glad you enjoyed.Bernard, thanks, glad you enjoyed.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-19417182809160488322013-09-01T09:07:00.770-05:002013-09-01T09:07:00.770-05:00Great addition.Great addition.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-10160731802361021952013-09-01T00:09:55.212-05:002013-09-01T00:09:55.212-05:00Oscar, lol.
Travis Cody, thanks, man.Oscar, lol.<br /><br />Travis Cody, thanks, man.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-85496013571964940202013-08-31T13:28:34.284-05:002013-08-31T13:28:34.284-05:00"...the weight of the myriad dead..."
T..."...the weight of the myriad dead..."<br /><br />That's a chilling phrase. And the sun as predator...very jarring.<br /><br />Nice work.Travis Codyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06192526507760146748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-73060610936407909572013-08-31T12:08:51.060-05:002013-08-31T12:08:51.060-05:00That's really thinking ahead!That's really thinking ahead!Oscar Casehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10328166606910469945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-70957971459498818902013-08-31T09:07:34.876-05:002013-08-31T09:07:34.876-05:00Ivan, I like that. I do think sometimes we crash.
...Ivan, I like that. I do think sometimes we crash.<br /><br />Randy, Most of these kinds of things come to me as images even before they are words. Or at least at the same time.<br /><br />Riot Kitty, interesting. I suspect the Dr. Who feeling is from your experience since I've never watched it. We all bring to writing our own experiences. that's a good thing.<br /><br />Laughingwolf, indeed. Hope the guy doesn't run into any apes there. :)<br /><br />Prashant, the sun is usually shown as benign, I think. But it won't always be. Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-87158965766309295382013-08-31T03:11:33.706-05:002013-08-31T03:11:33.706-05:00Charles, I liked your description of the sun — ver...Charles, I liked your description of the sun — very vivid.Prashant C. Trikannadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16079354501998741758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-69591571849200601742013-08-31T00:28:04.504-05:002013-08-31T00:28:04.504-05:00fire up the rockets, fly high...fire up the rockets, fly high...laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-12604750668202660842013-08-30T22:31:31.380-05:002013-08-30T22:31:31.380-05:00Excellent! And very Dr. Who.Excellent! And very Dr. Who.Riot Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725825736285347870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-70930467161365759312013-08-30T19:48:07.442-05:002013-08-30T19:48:07.442-05:00Nice imagery there. One can almost see oneself in ...Nice imagery there. One can almost see oneself in such a situation.Randy Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16627907086811387527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-57940440128395342272013-08-30T15:20:01.719-05:002013-08-30T15:20:01.719-05:00Good writing jogs memories, and even pseudo-memori...Good writing jogs memories, and even pseudo-memories.<br /><br />I am somehow reminded of Amanda Marhall's song, Dizzy:<br /><br />Such a strange thing <br />We think we are in control<br />We always know<br />Until we don't<br />Funny how the world can spin so fast<br />And we don't crash<br />We just get dizzyivanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05662075375182633162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-30338535159832989372013-08-30T13:07:16.383-05:002013-08-30T13:07:16.383-05:00Mark, nearly forever, if not quite that long.
Sag...Mark, nearly forever, if not quite that long.<br /><br />Sage, that would be wisdom. You'd probably survive longer than I would.<br /><br />Ty, hadn't really thought of a collection of them, although I have a couple more that I will post. a Chapbook type thing might be possible.<br /><br />Alex, yes indeed, yes indeed.<br /><br />Cloudia, thankee<br />Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-64433429789749902532013-08-30T11:29:08.304-05:002013-08-30T11:29:08.304-05:00Imagination!
AlohaImagination!<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />AlohaCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-44878859265108127292013-08-30T10:58:26.696-05:002013-08-30T10:58:26.696-05:00That's a long wait...That's a long wait...Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-47641561863644097772013-08-30T10:43:22.243-05:002013-08-30T10:43:22.243-05:00I like this one even better than the first, which ...I like this one even better than the first, which was solid.<br /><br />Keep 'em up, one here, one there, as you have time, and you'll have a collection eventually.Tyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09192814826756623212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28221839.post-77744178132703337292013-08-30T08:50:30.881-05:002013-08-30T08:50:30.881-05:00Wow, interesting, I think I'd try to set up ca...Wow, interesting, I think I'd try to set up camp at the boundary between day and night.sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.com